I can provide you with a prolonged and detailed website review. Deep and useful analysis + screenshots + improvement recommendations. Review can be sent you privately or published here on this blog. The advantage of public exposure is in that other people may leave their comments and ideas via comments and help yet more in improving website (or website template) but it is definitely up to you.
If you wish me to write such the review you will need to provide me with a link to website and transfer $25 to my PayPal account.
The process of preparing the review may take me a day or two.
If it concerns ThemeForest rejected templates I can not guarantee the acceptance of the item but significant help in improving template is promised. Thank you!